31 July, 2023 LynnM 0 Comments 0 categories Welcome to your Submission Review Book Title Does the book have verb tense issues? Yes, it was filled with them. There were a several per chapter. There were a few throughout the book. There were very few, if any. None How many POV characters does the book have? Does the book have head hopping? Yes, there is constant headhopping. There are occasional instances of headhopping. There is little to no headhopping. None How are the grammar and punctuation? Almost every sentence has a grammar and/or punctuation error. There are some grammar and punctuation errors, but they are not overwhelming. The errors are about as many as I would see in a book that needed a proofread. This is a very clean book. None Did you notice any plot holes? Yes, I found one of more major plot holes that affect the story as a whole. (Explain in the comment box.) Yes, I found some minor plot holes, but they don't really affect the story. I didn't notice any plot holes. None Do you think the characters are well-developed? Yes, I enjoyed the characters. No, I don't think they were well-developed. None How is the pacing? Slow. I found myself getting bored with it quite often. Neither fast nor slow, but I got bored at least once. I found the pacing to be appropriate for the book/genre. I couldn't put it down! None How is the ending? The ending is satisfying and wrapped up the story. The ending is just okay. I felt there are some unanswered questions. The book ends in a cliffhanger. None Do you think the genre is correct? If not, what genre do you think this book is? Would you recommend this book? Why or why not? Time's up More Books Leave a ReplyCancel reply This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed. Related Posts Preorder: All We Keep Buried All We Keep Buried is now available for preorder! When… Read More New Release: Get a Room Special Release Day Kindle Price: $2.99. Grab your copy today!… Read More New Release: Closer to Home Special Release Day Kindle Price: $2.99 Grab your copy today!… Read More
